A Smell Like Rotten Fish
Alone in the dark of a moonless night,
The fan slowly sweating overhead,
It seems as if nothing shall be right-
Your memories strewn across the bed.
In the locked dungeons of my mind,
Shackled, bound and suppressed,
I barely know what I shall find,
In wounds which have long since bled.
It all happened long ages ago,
The distance yet is blurred somehow,
Blindly I wonder why should it be so,
That the past strangles the here and now.
I would like to smile and to live again,
I would like to count my blessings few,
Though it's easier said than done,
To be fully and finally free of you.
Memories that won't let go of me,
Clinging to me unbidden, indiscreet,
As the rotten fish smell doesn't let you be,
Long after passing the fishermen's street.
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Madhukar
I loved the way you used the metaphor.
What is gone stays only in memory and light. Memory will perish with you but light will remain. We are therefore all immortals in one sense...
Please keep writing... We definitely expect more from you...
did you see some of my work... I'm anxious to see your views on my work...
Respectfully,
Amartya
Thanks Amartya. Glad that you
Thanks Amartya. Glad that you appreciated the metaphor.
Perfect
Hi,
I feel its a perfect take on the those break off days when survival itself is the biggest challenge but yet you dont have a choice but live.
Good Work
@loveulife
Thanks a million.