I see
I see beauty all around me
some can be touched others not as much
I see beauty all around me, some physical some in nature
I see beauty all around me, it is rite in my face but a million miles away
I see beauty all around me, duzz it know how beautiful it is
I see beauty all around me, can I touch it should I touch it
I see beauty all around me, and I am serious about it
I see beauty all around me, is it scared of the truth, duzz it want the truth
I see beauty all around me, and the beauty is always free
I see beauty all around me, and the beautiful truth of it all is, duzz it wont to see me.......</p>
some can be touched others not as much
I see beauty all around me, some physical some in nature
I see beauty all around me, it is rite in my face but a million miles away
I see beauty all around me, duzz it know how beautiful it is
I see beauty all around me, can I touch it should I touch it
I see beauty all around me, and I am serious about it
I see beauty all around me, is it scared of the truth, duzz it want the truth
I see beauty all around me, and the beauty is always free
I see beauty all around me, and the beautiful truth of it all is, duzz it wont to see me.......</p>
An Ismail original.......
Style / Type:
freeform
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Language:
English
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