THE EYE'S OF THE FALLEN
What am I doing, I would like to know why you are so happy.
When I gaze into your exsistance, your ora radiate's magnificance.
To much for me to stare, though I am fixated.
The creators blessings on you, rampage's my emotions.
What am I doing.
Style / Type:
freeform
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction):
What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
Language:
English
poem
much different from your I am who i am poem, yet still very good.
Thank you karee13
your words are truely kind and sincere.
Malik Ismail
lot of qstns
unanswered questions and and bland stare at what we are and no slightest echo to u inreturn and this was well expressed small but very gud,
"To much for me to stare, though I am fixated."
doesnt it shuld strt like "too"??
lavanya