~*~AS I WAIT~*~

  As I Wait ......                

        I wait and watch ...
Looking around at what surrounds....
Waiting to see where this takes me once again , finding true real bliss and realize there are good people.
there is way more to this insanity, paths that take me ways THAT ARE  more..
     I had no intentions of finding the one i
followed into it like a lost little duck was a sad broken heart- aching piece of dust blowing hard in the storm,
not to be tamed to any extent of contentness and peace filled
like I believed.
    No more love there just jealousy filled with hatred on an empty plate, was it fate?
waiting to plant a silly evil retreat.........
For what?

As I wait for the miraculous moment of true fate knowing in my heart and soul
its never to late...
 

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