Your Love is My Strength

prema_nair's picture

 

It was raining heavy
& I was standing lonely
At the bay of my life
In my hand a sharp knife

I was about to cut loose
from the life where I had nothing to choose
It was gonna be easy
just one cut and nothing to keep me busy

But then blew a breeze
cutting through me with so much ease
I felt the chill of the moment
then a warmth changed my judgement

Pictures passed across my mind
and your face made me sigh
The colour of your eyes
the love behind your lies

How can I just walk away
from the way you made me sway
You have moved to another world
but your love can still make me swirl

I can't give up
even though my life's an empty cup
Your love is brimming in my heart
It will help me make a new start

So in that heavy rain
I gobbled my pain
Iam not lonely anymore
your love gave me strength to fight  somemore                                                                                                                                                     

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amartya's picture

Welcome back

I love the poem because it's been written straight from the heart... and i also liked the way the story has been recited ...

amartya

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arrey sahi!! seriusly nevr

arrey sahi!! seriusly nevr knew u wer sch an anazing poet!! ya it just shot direct frm ur heart!~...and thats why it makes this poem just so simple yet wonderful!~

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prema_nair's picture

hi,

hi,

thank u so much for your comments

have a nice day

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falcon's picture

just love it....

its so true... we look at the pain which love causes, but we never see the optimism, the beauty of life it shows.... truely if love can persuade to take silly decisions so it can save few from doing so....
and for ur write... its awesome

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prema_nair's picture

hi

thanks a lot falcon.....

ya its true u can find optimism in anything if you jst look at da right place

thanks for the comment

have a nice day

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NinaAbbysays's picture

Nice.

I love this piece. it comes from the heart. Love will always be there; if not in a relationship, in family and friends that surround you everyday.

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