hands

I look with awe at worn out gnarled hands of a labourer

how well have they have served their master

mesmerised am I by a doctors hands gone rough with formaldehyde

how many lives saved they have

go green do I by matured hands of an elder woman

how many mouths have they satiated

watch with disbelief at hands of young village girls

who finish with alacrity a hundred tasks

smitten by love am I small tender hands

which raise only to touch with love

but.....

swept with pity am I by delicate manicured hands

which know only to look pretty and nothing else

                                               Ratnaprabha Raykar

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Ratnaprabha

LOL... so true...

welcome back

Amartya

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 Amartya hanks .iwould like

 Amartya

hanks .iwould like ur comment on my poems in general  are they mediocre

iwant an honest reply

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Hi,

 I found this again by chance. No writer, orator, poet or anyone else who can express himself (herself) in some form or another is mediocre! And you are definitely above most of them! 

Just wanted you to know that!

Respectfully,
Amartya

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