the pied piper of BPO
A cab in bangalore sped past me
in it sat girls and boys in their youth
they seemed weary,lost in their ipods or cells
they spoke not with each other
no giggles no guffaws
looking washed out,the magic of exuberance lost
what have we done to them?
the pied piper of BPO"s has lured
our children to its demony clasp
we have lost them to him!!
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well done
i like it and hate it....your right is why hate it and your write is why i like it.... :).. well done!