THE SPEECH OF FLAMES!~

                                                                                  THE SPEECH OF FLAMES!~

My heart sings a song, silently,

following its own train of thought,

serenely it weeps out, singles self out;

burns in its silent flames;

and rejenuvates then, a phoenix!


it rises through the ashes,

not with a sense of purpose, but-

a sense of humiliation;-

the very essence of its birth!!


humiliation brunt over it,

in the name of fake paranoid;

paramounts fear to the peak.


Brought down from a soaring nightingale,

to the dark ashes;

making it feel weak enough-

prone to get misinterpreted and

mibehaved with- always!


is this it? supposed to act dumb as a doll

that smiles through all its wreck?

Never is it allowed to sing out lud;

incase it loses its voice?

cant rustle a wing...what if a feather sticks out?

cant soar up and fly high....what if it gets preyed out?


it indeed is a beautiful phoenix, well cared for;

by the warm worl!

but.....


there comes the "but"-

as you flip a coin to the second,

who'll flip emotions that play a mirage?

flipping might show everyone-

its not a well-cared for pheonix afterall,

but just an another, in a golden cage!

locked u pin a golden cageof fake paranoid,

paramounting fear to the peak!


break open the cage! Might come a day as such!

And when sure it does,

the music that flows out, would cast an aura,

that confides in all ashes,

washes away the mirages; and-

smiles through its evolution, for a spectacular revolution!!!~

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prema_nair's picture

i loved da stream of

i loved da stream of thoughts..... jst lovely

i liked the usage of words but i think it looses its flow sumwhere along da line..... u knw da basic beauty of a poem.... the flow of it...

but i loved da way it starts & da way it ends....i guess its sumwhr in da middle dat i loose touch

but apart frm all dat.....u are a poet with immense talent.....this is a beautiful piece

keep writing & welcome to poemsnprose :)

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