THE SPEECH OF FLAMES!~
THE SPEECH OF FLAMES!~
My heart sings a song, silently,
following its own train of thought,
serenely it weeps out, singles self out;
burns in its silent flames;
and rejenuvates then, a phoenix!
it rises through the ashes,
not with a sense of purpose, but-
a sense of humiliation;-
the very essence of its birth!!
humiliation brunt over it,
in the name of fake paranoid;
paramounts fear to the peak.
Brought down from a soaring nightingale,
to the dark ashes;
making it feel weak enough-
prone to get misinterpreted and
mibehaved with- always!
is this it? supposed to act dumb as a doll
that smiles through all its wreck?
Never is it allowed to sing out lud;
incase it loses its voice?
cant rustle a wing...what if a feather sticks out?
cant soar up and fly high....what if it gets preyed out?
it indeed is a beautiful phoenix, well cared for;
by the warm worl!
but.....
there comes the "but"-
as you flip a coin to the second,
who'll flip emotions that play a mirage?
flipping might show everyone-
its not a well-cared for pheonix afterall,
but just an another, in a golden cage!
locked u pin a golden cageof fake paranoid,
paramounting fear to the peak!
break open the cage! Might come a day as such!
And when sure it does,
the music that flows out, would cast an aura,
that confides in all ashes,
washes away the mirages; and-
smiles through its evolution, for a spectacular revolution!!!~




i loved da stream of
i loved da stream of thoughts..... jst lovely
i liked the usage of words but i think it looses its flow sumwhere along da line..... u knw da basic beauty of a poem.... the flow of it...
but i loved da way it starts & da way it ends....i guess its sumwhr in da middle dat i loose touch
but apart frm all dat.....u are a poet with immense talent.....this is a beautiful piece
keep writing & welcome to poemsnprose :)
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