Imagining...
and me with my eclectic ideals...
Imagining understanding
gives me a headache,
so I write to alleviate,
it relaxes my mind...
and I become the rain pounding the roof.
The beep beep of the clock
and I am time without any...
the cold distance between planets
and I am frozen to the marrow...
I feel the pebbles through the tires
and mingle with the road...
but I'm home,
nursing my head.
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Richard
Welcome to PoemsNProse.com ....
Imagining can sometimes be an exhaustive exercise for the brain.... But we care poets... Can't help it, can we?
It is because of the imaginations of poets and philosophers that the world is what it is - for the better or for worse. We are jester to many yet leader to all... an eccentric profession, is it not?
To be able to write to alleviate is a precious gift because in the process the poet not only relaxes his mind but also those of his readers. This write was a unwinding write just like you wanted it to be...
Respectfully,
Amartya
PS: do keep visiting and writing to us... :)
Amartya...
Thank you for that more than precious view of this poem...
humbled by your words here...
Richard
hi
Great Poem...Good work........
Keep writing
Hi priya...
thank you and I'm glad you liked it...
Richard
I feel the pebbles through
I feel the pebbles through the tires
and mingle with the road...
Brilliant, you told the story of the princess and the pea in two lines! Seriously Awesome. I enjoyed the subtle imagery, it blended together so abstractly that I'm still re-reading just in case I missed any underlying connections. Welcome friend, show me more!
Richard, you w rite
Richard, you w rite sooooooooo beautifully!
joe
Richard, you w rite
Richard, you w rite sooooooooo beautifully!
joe
how truly and aptly put. i
how truly and aptly put. i get greatly worried when i do not get a headache for a long time
Imagining
Imagining understanding
gives me a headache,
so I write to alleviate,
it relaxes my mind...
and I become the rain pounding the roof.
MESMERISING!!!
Those lines are the best one can present for his debut...Welcome to Poems and Prose bro.....