Been here done that..
Been here done that..
We’ve each lived a millennium or more.
We’ve been together many times before.
We’ve seen our love flop, and seen it soar.
We’ve been happy and sad, been rich and poor.
We’ve walked together across this same floor.
We’ve entered and exited through this same door.
We’ve always loved each other, that’s at our core.
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Language:
English
(1 vote)
HI
A good sweet piece... Nice to read...
Makes me believe in soulmates all the more....