Holding You
Holding You
I taste your sweet and tender lips.
My arms entwine your perfect hips.
During this moment the world is bright.
I gaze into your eyes and hold on tight.
My mind explodes in waves of bliss.
Our passion exchanged in a single kiss.
I would give up all that I have to give
To make this the life you want to live.
Style / Type:
freeform
Review Request (Intensity):
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Language:
English
