Truer Words
Truer Words
The words you wrote for me not to see
made me soar so high feel so free.
Please say out loud the way you feel.
Don’t deny your love please make it real.
The love we once had was so strong
that the way you feel can’t be wrong.
If you’re silent from fear of how I’ll be
remember how much you once loved me.
Remember the great times we once had
and how long it took for times to go bad.
If you gave our love just one more try
I promise the great times would never die.
Together we’d live and love the rest of our life
with me as your husband and you as my wife.
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Language:
English
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wow
wow.. your wite is very nice i like the way you wrote it in such a simple and sweet manner.. good one
Reema..
Thank you Reema
Thank you Reema
Dear Truth24,
Welcome to the Poems & Prose family of friends!
This is an excellently thought out and very well articulated poem. I particularly loved the logic and the kind of cuteness used to write this! I've had major heartbreaks myself but it never occurred to put it so well, to me; strange!
I would LOVE to see you write again.
Respectfully,
Amartya
Thanks Amartya. I have
Thanks Amartya.
Mark