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Submitted by vaishaligupta60 on Tue, 05/19/2009 - 19:00

I Remember You

 

When the morning light falls.. I lay back to recall...
Being with you.. is I value all!!</p>

Lieing in your folded arms..
Staring you with charm..
Holding hands tight..
Caring.. sharing.. whole night !

Yeah, I remember you.. I remember that time..
the way we intertwine...
All those moments were so divine!!

I have seen the highs and lows
Life scatters when people goes..
I dont wanna loose ne more..
I dont wanna choose ne more !

A strong grip that would never let you go..
Mah selfless luv is all I wanna show..

Yeah, I remember you.. Yes I do..
Because memories never drown...
And my honey mah love will never let you down !!

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Love is Divine

Submitted by loveulife on Tue, 05/19/2009 - 21:27.

It sounded like a heartfelt love song....Good work

The ability to carry the readers through the emotions of your poem makes a poet special

Let me tell you,  you are  gifted with that virtue.

cool

Submitted by Antman on Wed, 05/20/2009 - 05:00.

you are a good writer. how long have you been writing

thx buddy...

Submitted by vaishaligupta60 on Wed, 05/20/2009 - 17:19.

thnkuu fer reading n writing.. well em nt writing frm vry long period.. uummm arnd one yr r so.. 

hi

Submitted by PriyaNair on Wed, 05/20/2009 - 05:12.

Well, I know you are in love and crazy love i must say....But thats exactly how its supposed to be.

Wish you both all the hapiness on earth, may you both feel the same way about eachother 100 years from now.

Good poem.

Priya Nair

hehe

Submitted by vaishaligupta60 on Wed, 05/20/2009 - 17:20.

hey priya.. i  agree to dat.. but u can see mixed emotions alwayz in mah poems.. bcz em vry confused types.. [:D] 

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Vaishali

Submitted by jack the ripper on Wed, 05/20/2009 - 21:40.

To be confused is often love... sorry for poking my nose...

Amartya

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HI

Submitted by prema_nair on Wed, 05/20/2009 - 13:06.

nice work. the emotions you wanted to show came through very well.  it was very beautifully put.  thanks for the poem.

keep writing

Prema.

thx to all..

Submitted by vaishaligupta60 on Fri, 05/22/2009 - 18:57.

thanks..

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HEY

Submitted by vinie d pooh on Fri, 05/29/2009 - 16:44.

Wow...

This one's a truly wonderful poem....Could really feel the magic of love...good work....keep up...