LOVE so beautiful..

 LOVE so beautiful

On the canvas of sky when the morning light falls..
I just wake up with a thought of yours
That makes me smile all day long.

Tiny droplets of water in my palms
kept swinging as I do in your arms
The breeze that blew through ma hair
brought your fragrance along as if you are near
This beautiful glimpse of nature makes me rejoice
I have painted my love with the colors of your choice.

I alwayz thought dreams never come true
till i discovered the faith in you
Your eyes make ma heart sway
Your touch takes ma blues away
when you look into ma eyes, I feel lured
In the cuddle of your arms, I feel secured.

Barefoot i will walk with you endless miles
Leaving my belongings behind
I will stay with you fer every breath you take
I will hold you everytime you shake
Moments spent with you are turning gold
they ll remain in ma memories keeping a hold!</div>

 
LOve that you have poured
Will let me reach the shore
The care and concern you show
Embrace my love for you all the more!!
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you write well

i dont usually like love poems.  I like this one.  My guess is you have more experience in love than most ive read that write about it.  I say this only to point out how completely you express it.  You are good; I hope to see more from you. 

 

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jack the ripper's picture

Vaishali

Poets generally commit the mistake of writing about the pain behind love. Your poem is refreshing because it expresses about the light behind it... I think it's been craftily written...

Thanks... Feels good to read good things about the emotion of love...

 

Respectfully,
Amartya

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nice

well done......

 

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thx to all..

thx to all..

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