LOVE so beautiful..
LOVE so beautiful
On the canvas of sky when the morning light falls..
I just wake up with a thought of yours
That makes me smile all day long.
I just wake up with a thought of yours
That makes me smile all day long.
Tiny droplets of water in my palms
kept swinging as I do in your arms
The breeze that blew through ma hair
brought your fragrance along as if you are near
This beautiful glimpse of nature makes me rejoice
I have painted my love with the colors of your choice.
I alwayz thought dreams never come true
till i discovered the faith in you
Your eyes make ma heart sway
Your touch takes ma blues away
when you look into ma eyes, I feel lured
In the cuddle of your arms, I feel secured.
Barefoot i will walk with you endless miles
Leaving my belongings behind
I will stay with you fer every breath you take
I will hold you everytime you shake
Moments spent with you are turning gold
they ll remain in ma memories keeping a hold!</div>
LOve that you have poured
Will let me reach the shore
The care and concern you show
Embrace my love for you all the more!!
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Will let me reach the shore
The care and concern you show
Embrace my love for you all the more!!
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you write well
i dont usually like love poems. I like this one. My guess is you have more experience in love than most ive read that write about it. I say this only to point out how completely you express it. You are good; I hope to see more from you.
Mocit
Vaishali
Poets generally commit the mistake of writing about the pain behind love. Your poem is refreshing because it expresses about the light behind it... I think it's been craftily written...
Thanks... Feels good to read good things about the emotion of love...
Respectfully,
Amartya
nice
well done......
thx to all..
thx to all..