ORpHans
Standing alone are the eyes full of tears
Still there is no one to cheer
So many grieves to share
Still there is no one to care
So many haven't reached the pole
Still there is no one to hold
Do we have a reason to exist
Is there any good cause to which we fit
Not a penny to lend, not a hand to lift
They'll remain there, they'll die in the midst
Heartless souls have no mercy yet
Humanity is the one we have lost in the bet
Are we blind enough to see the sorrows?
Are we deaf enough to hear the call for help?
Wake up morons... rise up to the call
Luxury, feast, desires are not all
Lend a hand... make an effort to bend
Smiles you spread will not cost you then
Wipe away the reasons that made them cried
All you get is the state of being gratified!
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Beautiful!
Well written! I really like it. i'll cry for us all and hope for us more thanks to you. Bravo!
thx buddy...
thx ya.. appreciation is alwayz welcome.. :D
Vaishali
Welcome to Poems N Prose...
Your thoughts are beautiful and so is this poem. I liked the piece... Hope to see more from you soom...
The write moved me and will certainly do whats its intended to do with other readers too...
Suggestions:
"So many haven't reached the pole
Still there is no one to hold"
Did not quite understand what you meant by this?
"Wipe away the reasons that made them cried" -- .... that made them cry
Respectfully,
Amartya
hey..
hey.. thx a lot fer ya appreciation and suggestions.. will keep dem in mind alwayzz..
So many haven't reached the pole .....Still there is no one to hold...
this means... dat so many orphans have not yet reached dere destination (pole).. they dont kno wer to go n wht to do...
still der is no one to guide dem.. to hold dem.. n let dem reach the shore
Vaishali
Thank you for accepting the suggestion. I really appreciate it. The poem is good.
Respectfully,
Amartya