Gold, Silver and Platinum
Loses their name
In those moments of subtle interaction
Engraved with love in my heart
When I refresh that thought.
The treasure I had and I have forever
Glitter when I recall from memory
Redeeming my glory,
As death is for everyone
But my life was for someone.
good one
i like the content of the poem...but i feel u could improve on the presentation...
just a thought