Apostrophe to Alpha - Omega
Hell on earth and pain!
how many amiss beings are here and there,
how foul mankind is!
O great new world,
you have such people in you.
Author of all things,
is this your constitution!
In your operations probity has no valuation.
The impure men got a deal in his command without his power,
they are strong with their odd force - Offence.
They could control the reigm and make money and mirth.
Redeemer my Lord...
make your operations good fortune,
save the probity give her a value,
save the saints give them soverginship.
Alpha - Omega,
determine the frowns of fortune,
seize this snatcher of sacred spirits the 666,
with thy amuck wrath.
Skald Quill Carry
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