Eartly Epistle
Whereupon you in a conundrun,
wheeze not.
thou art in a fallacy,
do not own the proclivity of smooth squeak;
Spike thy intellect in the junction of thoughts.
By thy verve and valor of thy reckoning cerebrum...
Shall jerk the world off.
Skald Quill Carry
Style / Type:
Western Classic
Review Request (Intensity):
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
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How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Language:
English
