I love you
It is like making romance in the garden of heaven,
when I with you.
It is like glancing the beauty of nature,
when I glance you.
It is like sucking the sweet from cherry fruit,
when I kiss you.
It is like injecting vodka in the blood of mine,
when I in you.
Hay you,
I love you.
Skald Quill Carry
Style / Type:
Western Classic
Review Request (Intensity):
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Review Request (Direction):
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Language:
English
