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Hark my chum,

no woman is pixy,

woman is just an ornament sex.


They never have anything to say,

but what they say is captivating.

They are hypnotic, they are more powerful than magnet.


Woman exultation at consciousness

over probities and gratifies at probabilities.

There are only two species of woman,

one is sheer and other the spectrum.


The sheer woman is very precious

and is worth one's salinize.

If thou exigency to attain eminence for genuflexion,

thee should mearly take her

deep of her desire.


The other woman is bewich,

she assuredly commits a mistake;

moreover, she exposes in order to try and look green,

But remember, she just paints!

to know of her,

is to forget thouself.

 

Skald Quill Carry

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