My whole truth
None I abuse, for none hath abused me,
I love nature and then to nature art.
I cross the Rubicon to have creed in Trinity,
yet this propel is perplexing!
I dangle on determination and loggon logic thinking,
will-o'-the-wisp is I dislike.
Altruism is I like and bestowal too,
rus in urbe is I reluctate.
Detachment is I like, but not subsisting in it.
I like of making glance on gestures of one's,
and to interpret one's id and its idioms.
Avocation is mine of making stanzas,
I even like English words to frame them new.
What my I to you,
I dose myself wretched collating to few.
Skald Quill Carry
Style / Type:
Western Classic
Review Request (Intensity):
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Review Request (Direction):
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Language:
English




