Words

Vijay Vardhan Kudari's picture

Words, nothing but words,

how awesome they are!

How sharp, realistic and cold-blooded!

One could not slip from the fingers of them,

nevertheless what an artful witchery there is in them!

They seemed to be able to give

ductile form of lineamentless and amorphous things,

praira words...

is there anything realistic than words?

 

Skald Quill Carry

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