My Journey....
On a sultry afternoon when the breeze blows my hair..
as i see the people around me moving everywhere
i think back at all i ve lost and all i ve gained
all the clear moments and some memories stained...
of all the hurts,disagreements and fights
and all the patch ups,sorries and cuddly nights
of the carefree attitude and the experiences wild..
the advice of the elders,the smile of a child...
of all the funny times and silly bets
big mistakes and bigger regrets
of all the longing and magic of that first love
standing together under the rain from above
the nervousness and excitement before a date
bringing down the stars for that perfect soulmate
of the disappointments and hurts..the pieces of the heart
the pain of moving on...making a new start
of all the tears and laughs through joys n trouble
the battle wid life...the never ending struggle
of the desires and fantasies which could never be coped
those wishes and prayers....miracles never hoped...
of the fears and failures...flowers with thorns..
thinking of yesterday..listening to sad songs...
of the turns of fate...twists and bends..
leaning on a shoulder...the silence between friends..
of the walks on the beach...under the glittering stars
the dreams to accomplish..the goals still far...
of making a name..standing on your feet..
the valuable penny for the beggar on the street..
of achieving success and shouting out loud..
the feeling of loneliness amidst a crowd..
watching the sun go down and rise yet again..
i realize the little losses and the greater gains
looking ahead..i still have so much to live..
more to learn..more to give...
i may not be able to reach the stars or the moon...
yet i know for sure...my journey wont stop here on this sultry afternoon...





wow again
Vinie,
Time and again you come up with these little gems. You opened up the mysteries of contemplation and soul searching very well... This poem is food for many other poems... Very well written indeed... The style is new but thats one of this things this site is about... I'm sorry this was missed before... :)
Respectfully,
Amartya
hii
nice work. i enjoyed this one.
it had so much feel to it.
but the construction of the poem got me lost in between. but its jst tht. the poem was a real masterpiece. thank u very much.
Keep writing
thanks,
Prema
@ Amartya and Prema...
Thank you sooo much both of you....
I'm glad to know that you liked my poem....thanks for reading it and commenting on it...thanks for all your appreciaton....
Do keep encouraging me like this...
bravo!!
loved this piece.......was completely lost in it...
i think everyone atleast once in his/her life looks back and feels the same way as depicted by your poem...
this indeed is a masterpiece for me....
BEAUTIFUL!!!!
BEAUTIFUL!!!!