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Submitted by vinita_rk on Wed, 09/30/2009 - 14:15

I laugh, I cry

I smile, I frown

I cringe, I have a fringe

I lose my sanity all day long

 

I cruise, I muse

I refuse to diffuse

I choose to be less

I crib then about the crapiness

 

I am a hypocrite,

I am a talker,

I am arrogant,

I don't shy from thinking straight-forward

 

I view life from no glasses,

I view myself with no creases,

I am a b****

I am a saint

 

Who the hell, Do I think me to be, for making you read ME?

 

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reema's picture

WOW

Submitted by reema on Wed, 09/30/2009 - 18:38.

WOW.. NICE DESCRIBED ABOUT YOUR SELF GOOD ONE... I LIKED YOUR HONESTY....

REEMA...

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amartya's picture

LOL...

Submitted by amartya on Wed, 09/30/2009 - 20:15.

you are only human...

loved it.. did sound a little like a certain mobile phone advertisement though..

Respectfully,
Amartya

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hey...

Submitted by vinita_rk on Wed, 09/30/2009 - 23:08.

thanks for the comments. i dont know whether it is me or just somebody inside me...but i wrote it and i appreciate your comments.

 

love,

vini

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Prashant Preman's picture

Hey Vini!

Submitted by Prashant Preman on Thu, 10/08/2009 - 19:36.

Beautifully expressed.... Awesome!

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hey prashant

Submitted by vinita_rk on Tue, 10/13/2009 - 14:19.

thanks for the comments! appreciate them.. more because.. this poem is what is me..!

 

 vini

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