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Submitted by vinita_rk on Tue, 05/05/2009 - 11:24




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'TODAY I SAW YOU,I MET ME,

 I LOOKED AT YOU,SAW MYSELF.

 CONVERSED,HELD HANDS,LAUGHED AND TALKED.

 ..AS IF TALKING TO ME.

 COMPLAINED,YELLED,BUGGED...YOU NODDED LIKE

 YOU KNEW WHAT I SAID.

 DIDNT REPLY,DIDNT GET IRRITATED...

 ALL YOU DID WAS LISTEN,WHEN I AM LISTENED TO..

 BUT TODAY I HEARD ME.

 TODAY I SAW YOU,I MET ME...'

 

 

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jack the ripper's picture

Huuum! interesting thought

Submitted by jack the ripper on Tue, 05/05/2009 - 17:17.

wonder if you were looking at the mirror while writing this...  cuz another person SO similar to you? Are you sure? From the view point of poetry I think this is different but well written... Did you read about Blank Verse as suggested by Joe? You poems are somewhat similar...

As observed before you are a good poet... I'm sure you will better and some day even the best, possibly...

Keep writing.

Amartya

prema_nair's picture

hiii

Submitted by prema_nair on Tue, 05/05/2009 - 18:44.

hey,

nice work. i liked the overall idea.

thanks,

Prema

Museem's picture

NO COMMENTS Vinita....i am

Submitted by Museem on Wed, 05/06/2009 - 18:45.

NO COMMENTS Vinita....i am just speechless

impressive

Submitted by Byebye on Thu, 05/07/2009 - 09:17.

It has been said that we all have a perfect clone somewhere in the world...  or could it be that sanity has finally escaped you (meaning the' you' in the poem, ofcourse)?

This style of writing I have not seen before, and I like it very much!

 

Mocit

 

kitu_1602's picture

hey i dnt write......neither

Submitted by kitu_1602 on Fri, 05/08/2009 - 13:57.

hey i dnt write......neither hv tried it.....bt love reading.

dunno wht to say.....dis poem is totally diff......m a bit confused.....lol