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Submitted by vinita_rk on Fri, 06/26/2009 - 10:57

Drops of rain,

Nei, I dont call it drops of heaven

are pure and calm

 

Off they fall

call it snow

or call it dew

They make you dance to their tunes

 

Dull roads brighten up,

Hungry animals sip it up,

Men, women and kids rejoice

 

loss of words

or rather choice of words

better to talk less than more

 

Come on rains, enjoy!

Pour ur heart out, let all the sad tears wash away

 

 

 

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Vinita

Submitted by jack the ripper on Sun, 06/28/2009 - 17:20.

Well written thought... :)

Personally, I look at rain a little differently.... When it rains I think of the homeless.... Rain is for the rich to enjoy...

Respectfully,
Amartya

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hi

Submitted by prema_nair on Sun, 06/28/2009 - 22:33.

did u just write that?? WOW

i loved it... it was fabolous.... who knew rain could b expressed like this tooo ...... u r really good

Keep writing

thanks,

Prema

thanks for catching those in

Submitted by enjoyingpoems. on Sun, 07/26/2009 - 09:36.

thanks for catching those in ur poem..enjoyed it :)