Child

A child sees a better world
A child loves stories told
A child plays unseen adventures
A child never sees the danger unfold

Long ago we were all children
We played with an invisible friend
The joy we could always find
But one day, childhood came to an end

A parent is there to protect the child
A parent sees the real world outside
A parent will never go away
A parent is still a child deep inside

I miss the arms of my Mother
The authority of my Father's voice
The love of my Grandmother and Grampy
Just to have another day with them to rejoice

That child long ago, used to be me
That child long ago, they lifted up above
That child long ago, I want to be again
That child long ago, always had their love

copyright Chris Smith 17th December 2009

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Nice job.

 I really liked how you portrayed the child and parent. Nice job.

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ah!! the childhood days... we

ah!! the childhood days... we can never get them back!but yes we can recreate our childhood days for our children and mete them what our parents did for us . a very good write

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childhood

Sometimes, I just hate the world and GOD to let me to grow and for not allowing me to be a child forever and have such innocence. Alas, the fate never gives my cherish dream and still I try to behold such innocence  and it seems im in a dream and i would wake up sometime to realise dreams are to end at one point of time and face reality.

ITs christmas and i just wish santa to give this wish.

Welshpoet, u have outdone it as usual.

LAvanya

 

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