Love is a Sailboat
As our minds float on the regretful sea of sorrow and pain,
our hearts remain in the tides of passion and forgiveness.
And as the wind mildly ruffles the water, just enough for minds and hearts to intertwine,
our love sets sail with a view clung to the everlasting horizon of hope...
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Dear Chloevanderbilt,
Welcome to the Poems & Prose family!
About the poem: "our love sets sail with a view clung to the everlasting horizon of hope..."
The above lines sealed it for me. Love is all about hope at least thats what my persistent failure in love taught. Some think they achieved love; the only problem is that they know nothing about it (love).
I'm glad that the poet noted this point.
Respectfully,
Amartya
PS: This is a nice poem documented/submitted as a story. Though I'm aware that a new member often finds it confusing to understand the various processes we follow to submit posts and that we are looking for a better idea to correct this, the fact remains that proper categorization helps a post increase its chances to be commented on.
Prose/Poetry?
Oh I'm so sorry. I'll remember that for next time. I apologize.
And, I'm glad you liked it.
Hi,
this is your community and we all are peers.. No need for apologies..
Just pointed out :)
Amartya
Hi
I agree with you.... Hope is the only factor which gives you strength to go on in the game called love ...
You have expressed a volume of emotions in those 4 lines...
Good going... Keep Writing
Thank you. :) I'm glad you
Thank you. :)
I'm glad you liked it.
Great!
My favorite line:
As our minds float on the regretful sea of sorrow and pain
Probably because it's such a poetic way to describe the feeling of sorrow and pain.